We only have one lesson this week, so there is only one opportunity for discussion. The teacher hopes we can show our work to her. After a dress rehearsal, the teacher came to make the first audience of our work. After we finished the performance, the teacher gave us some advice. There is a lack of a peak in our work. As an audience, she does not feel the climax of the work. At the same time, she feels that the character of anxiety is not so obvious. The teacher suggested that we can divide the work into two parts. In the first part, we can let the Maggie talk to the doctor and does not end up well. The role of anxiety can also be divided into two parts. In the first part, anxiety can be fearless because it knows that Maggie will not easily leave it, in the second part it can become particularly nervous because Maggie calls Sam, indicating that Maggie does not need it anymore. The teacher gave me a lot of emotional help.
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